2023年6月17日雅思大作文真题

People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?

Undoubtedly, in civic society, whenever any crime is recognised and proven with evidence, the offender gets sentenced according to his delinquency level.  However, there are dreadful sights where people start acting as wrongdoers soon after being prosecuted. In this essay, I will examine the reasons for these unaccepted deeds and the possible solutions.

Generally speaking, there are multiple reasons for this trend of a convicted person. First, perhaps, the main reason is acceptability in society. For example, he faces scorning and mental troubles when he will mix with his family, peers, and community. This behaviour will compel him to stay alone and eventually, this alienation will trigger him to do wrong deeds. Additionally, the lack of government-level policy contributes to the same act because there is no opportunity to have earnings to lead a respectable life in the community for an ex-felon. A good illustration of this situation could be the recent research paper published in Pakistan. The author says that almost 70% of convicted people turn back to the same offences because they perceive there is no wreath for them except poverty and loath.

To combat this trend, first support has to come from the family and peers. They have to offer compassion and counselling towards a better life. The more they will sympathise, the greater possibility for the convicted guy to have a respectable livelihood. For example, the parents can take him to outdoor activities like sports or engage him in training to have a suitable job to gain a fantastic family life which eventually compels him to forget his disrespectful life. The next contribution towards deterring this action could come from the appropriate government authority who should take responsibility for these special thongs through various training and occupations as suitable for individuals. For example, during the punishment period, as per individuals’ attitude, they could be engaged in various electronics, handicrafts, and mechanical works; later on, can be placed as they trained. This not only refrains them from the tantrums but also motivates them to show gratitude to the system and as a whole to the country.

In conclusion, I would like to say that, though there are challenges still with proper planning and guidance they will not be a liability for the country but rather could be an asset in the long run. Therefore, the more rehabilitation can manage for the punished people, the reduction of crimes will be greater which eventually upgrade the status of the whole country as a law-abiding people.

毋庸置疑，在公民社会中，只要任何犯罪被确认并有证据证明，犯罪者就会根据其犯罪程度被判刑。 然而，有一些可怕的景象是，人们在被起诉后不久就开始充当不法分子。在这篇文章中，我将研究这些不被接受的行为的原因和可能的解决方案。

一般来说，被定罪者的这种趋势有多种原因。首先，也许主要原因是社会的可接受性。例如，当他将与他的家人、同龄人和社区混在一起时，他将面临嘲讽和精神困境。这种行为将迫使他保持孤独，最终，这种疏远将引发他做错事。此外，政府层面的政策缺失也助长了这一行为，因为前重刑犯没有机会获得收入，无法在社区过上有尊严的生活。最近在巴基斯坦发表的研究论文可以很好地说明这种情况。作者说，几乎70%的被定罪者会重操旧业，因为他们认为除了贫穷和厌恶之外，没有任何花环可供他们使用。

为了打击这种趋势，首先必须从家庭和同龄人那里获得支持。他们必须提供同情和咨询，以实现更好的生活。他们越是同情，被定罪的人就越有可能获得体面的生活。例如，父母可以带他去参加体育等户外活动，或者让他参加培训，以获得一份合适的工作，从而获得美好的家庭生活，最终迫使他忘记自己不受尊重的生活。对阻止这种行为的下一个贡献可以来自适当的政府当局，他们应该通过各种培训和适合个人的职业对这些特殊的丁字裤负责。例如，在惩罚期间，根据个人的态度，他们可以从事各种电子、手工艺和机械工作；后来，可以按照他们的训练安排。这不仅使他们不再发脾气，而且还能激励他们对制度和整个国家表示感谢。

最后，我想说的是，虽然有挑战，但在适当的规划和指导下，它们不会成为国家的负担，从长远来看，反而是一种资产。因此，对受罚者的改造越多，犯罪的减少就越多，最终会提升整个国家作为一个守法社会的地位。